I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
HI Callum, good work I learnt LOADS from this. I really like how you made a little animation about what happens if the volcano erupts. Maybe next time you can put a little documentary at the end. By Dylan
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
HI Callum, good work I learnt LOADS from this. I really like how you made a little animation about what happens if the volcano erupts. Maybe next time you can put a little documentary at the end.
ReplyDeleteBy Dylan