I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
We have been doing some work based around the All Blacks so we had to fill in a sheet about what we know about the All Blacks, What we want to know about the All Blacks and what we found out about the All Blacks. Here is my work -
Hi Callum, This looks awesome and it looks like you have done heaps of work. I like how you added the picture of your work. Next time could you add more about it and explain it more. BYE!
Hi Callum I like how you have put introduction what you being doing for CIP next time you should put more words in what you found out.Great Job Callum keep going.
Hi Callum good job on the post. I know that one of your facts are off. The All Blacks were formed in 1892 and 1987 was when they won there first cup. Apart from that good job Callum
Hi Callum, Vin here Decent everything overall, and you did your work very well, but your intro does work because from reading it I understand what you were told to do but I think more details should have been added.
Hi, Callum I really like your blog post about the All Blacks that you have done. I really like it you have done a great work keep up the good work that you are doing in your blog. Also the picture maybe next time you could make it bigger.
Hi Callum I really like they way yuo did your 3 box you have done lot of things about the all Blacks you are awesome at knowing the all blacks. Remamber to put on some picture on But good Job.
hi callum. i think you need to add more sentence in your next blog post and maybe add a little bit more detail.what do you think you will change next time.
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Hi Callum,
ReplyDeleteGood job on the blog but maybe next time you could make the picture a bit bigger because its hard to read.
Hi Callum,
ReplyDeleteThis looks awesome and it looks like you have done heaps of work.
I like how you added the picture of your work.
Next time could you add more about it and explain it more.
BYE!
Hi Callum I like how you have put introduction what you being doing for CIP next time you should put more words in what you found out.Great Job Callum keep going.
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Hi Callum good job on the post. I know that one of your facts are off. The All Blacks were formed in 1892 and 1987 was when they won there first cup. Apart from that good job Callum
ReplyDeleteHi Callum, Vin here
ReplyDeleteDecent everything overall, and you did your work very well, but your intro does work because from reading it I understand what you were told to do but I think more details should have been added.
Bye!
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ReplyDeleteCallum I really like your blog post about the All Blacks that you have done. I really like it you have done a great work keep up the good work that you are doing in your blog. Also the picture maybe next time you could make it bigger.
Kia ora bloggers great job on the all blacks poster. It has lots of information on it on the all blacks.
ReplyDeleteHi Callum I really like they way yuo did your 3 box you have done lot of things about the all Blacks you are awesome at knowing the all blacks. Remamber to put on some picture on But good Job.
ReplyDeletehi callum. i think you need to add more sentence in your next blog post and maybe add a little bit more detail.what do you think you will change next time.
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