I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today in C.I.P we had to make a slide about the kahui birds. Me and my buddy Jayden made the slide and put all the information on it. Here is the slide
Hi it me Jayden I like how you describe the birds my favourite bit is what the birds eat and next time can you write are the birds endangered species or not.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Callum!
ReplyDeleteGreat job working on this task, I enjoyed learning more about our special kahui birds. Which one is your favourite?
- Miss Birtch
Thank You For Your Comment. To Answer Your Question... My Favourite Bird Is Mohua Because Im In The Mohua Kahui. Thank You For Your Time.
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ReplyDeleteHi it me Jayden I like how you describe the birds my favourite bit is what the birds eat and next time can you write are the birds endangered species or not.
ReplyDeleteBy Jayden