I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like that you are using SiSoMo in your blog posts. You have included a lot of information about the story. Take care to check you work before you publish.
I like that you are using SiSoMo in your blog posts. You have included a lot of information about the story. Take care to check you work before you publish.
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hi my name is julia
ReplyDeleteoh my gosh that is so cute i love callum
hi my name is julia
ReplyDeletei love the puppy
I like that you are using SiSoMo in your blog posts. You have included a lot of information about the story. Take care to check you work before you publish.
ReplyDeleteI like that you are using SiSoMo in your blog posts. You have included a lot of information about the story. Take care to check you work before you publish.
ReplyDeletethanks for commenting
Deletehi wow the dogs are so adorable as kittens but puppy's are so cute is that right
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