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Saturday 5 November 2016

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Is scootering in school good or bad? In my opinion i think scootering should be allowed in school because it gets people from one place to another. It would take all your time out and you wont gets spare time to do things. You could just could get to places quicker
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It gets people motivated to get outside and move around. It also helps them get fit and healthy. They can get use to it and then maybe instead on using scooters they could run.

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It gives you a break on learning in the classroom.It will help with fitness and you can take your mind off learning for 5 or so minutes and enjoy the freash air outside.

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Gets you to different landmarks quicker and easier.If i want to get from the office to room 16 i could just scoot there then i would get there quicker than running and stopping and then it would help everyday from getting to 1 place to another.
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Overall it's a good idea to have scooters in schools to get from a place to another. But would you use them correctly?


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