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Thursday 24 November 2016

scientist writing

the following 3 weeks we have been working on a piece of writing heres mine.



A scientist just developed a new potion that turns people invisible. But he's not sure if he should let people use it. Should he let people use it or not.

He should not let people use it there could be really really really bad side effects such as fainting and poisonous items in that specific potion. What if it knocked you out for 10 minutes or something crazy like that. What if it poisoned you from a liquid inside it or something.

Also there's other bad things you could do with it such as stealing or any sort of  crime like hurting people that do good things around the cities or towns.But with this potion you could spy on people so it can be good because you could spy on bad people around the town. They might do bad stuff like crime usage, like robbing, shooting people or ransom/kidnapping someone then making people give them money then letting the person they kidnapped go.

last of all it could do something different like instead of going invisible it might make you fly and if there two potion that equal up to the same color. they might get given the potion and I could make you fly, read minds, superfast or walk through walls. Also somethings other things so it can be really dangerous so in my opinion the scientist should not go and sell/give away his dangerous potion.

After all i think that it's bad/dangerous and bad to give away/sell a potion when there's all these things that could go wrong so if i got asked if i wanted it I would say no. What would you say?

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