I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For cybersmart we had to reccomend a book fro curious kiwi because he forgot his book for the flight so I made a short drawing of my work.....Hope you enjoy
Well done Callum! I'm impressed you used Drawings to create this post! It looks great! I also like that you used a star system to rate the book. Good work!
I would like to suggest that you proofread each section before you publish. Some sentences appear to be missing words :-)
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Well done Callum! I'm impressed you used Drawings to create this post! It looks great! I also like that you used a star system to rate the book. Good work!
ReplyDeleteI would like to suggest that you proofread each section before you publish. Some sentences appear to be missing words :-)