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Tuesday 5 December 2017

The lighthouse

We have been doing a lighthouse story for literacy so I was going to post mine on so this is it!

“Woohoo!” the citizens shout “Oh come on… be quite” The owner of a lighthouse grumbled SLAM! The window goes “ahh peace and quiet...for once” whispered the owner of the lighthouse to himself! BANG “what was that” the owner of the lighthouse said nervously all the noise for the local town went silent the one citizen said “the lighthouse light just blew!” they all grumbled “wait a minute we could get our lanterns and go over and help him” one of the citizens said “sound like a plan” they all called!

Meanwhile at the lighthouse the owner of the lighthouse climbed stairs to look at what had happened he couldn't find anything he went to the top floor… no light that's strange luck I have my toolbox to fix it, let me just get the bulb protector out and we will be on our way CLUNK CLUNK “yay it's out now let's go!” Smash “oh no I tripped on my toolbox…” “wait there's light outside its the citizens here to save the day but there's still a while for them to go” -Turns around- “Oh no a boat ” *2 hours later* “hurry citizens the boats like 20 meters away from the rocks all on a sudden the citizens got in and directed the boat to land “How did you guys get in “don't wor…” “the door was open  

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