I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
1. Fault - Fault is a book about two kids who are caught smoking and accidentally hurt a little kid, I didnt really like the book because it was short and boring, but it was alright, I guess.
'Fault' is a play script so it only has dialogue, which gives action not description. I can be hard to get details across just in dialogue, it is more interesting when you see it acted. Remember to bring your own book next time.
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'Fault' is a play script so it only has dialogue, which gives action not description. I can be hard to get details across just in dialogue, it is more interesting when you see it acted. Remember to bring your own book next time.
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