Lately we have been doing something called narative writing. we got to pick anything wether it fiction or non-fiction... I picked to make one up/fiction.
Here is the writing.
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It all started on a stormy night like tonight. The sky was grey and no-one was to be seen. ZAP!! Went the lightning onto the road. There was a bunch of steam and then came a ventriloquist dummy named Punchy.
Punchy wanted to be loved by someone, anyone.
He just wanted to be loved.
His last family left him at an abandoned house and
he was never to be seen… until today.
He walked along the street looking for
someone to be his family… Then he saw
Frank & Ronal through a window,
He picked them up with the force and ran into
the middle of the street the he got zapped by a streak
of lightning and after the steam fluttered away,
they were nowhere to be seen.
Frank & Ronal were best friends, they meet
when they were 5, they went to the
same primary school. They meet each other
when they were playing in the under
6’s league team. They wanted to start a business
but they didn't know what to do,
then they went to a garage sale and saw heaps
of old junk that would be useful
to them. They looked at each other with
glee and said slowly but loudly,
“JUNK BROTHERS”
They were just starting to craft/make
posters to advertise the company when
Punchy took them.
When Frank & Ronal woke up they were in
a dark abandoned house called the
freak house. They looked at each other
then tried to scream but nothing came out...
They were tied up with a black strong fabric.
They heard some sort of giggle behind
them and they looked back there was a
wizard and a witch casting some sort
of spell.Then Punchy appeared from nowhere
and Punchy said “Listen up, you are going
to do exactly what I say, ok?” Frank &
Ronal nodded there head quickly. Frank
and Ronal knew they were in trouble
they just had no idea how much.
They were ordered to create a character of him.
They set off finding the materials
they needed to make it. They searched their
house and tried to find anything that
they could use for the character! They thought
long and hard and then finally
came up with what they were going to make
to be created as a villain.
They found metal in the garage to use for the eyeballs.
They cut out 2 small
circles and 2 medium circles, they painted the smalls ones
blue for the eyeballs,
they just needed wood and brick.
The End
Part 2 coming soon
